If ever words were spoken
Painful and untrue
I said I loved but I lied
In my life
All I wanted
Was the keeping
Of someone like you
As it turns out
Deeper within me
Love was twisted and pointed at you
Never ending pain, quickly ending life --
(Chorus)
You keep this love, thing, child, toy
You keep this love, fist, scar, break
You keep this love
Id been the tempting one
Stole her from herself
This gift in pain
Her pain was life
And sometimes I feel so sorry
I regret this the hurting of you
But you make me so unhappy
Id take my life and leave love with you
Id kill myself for you, Id kill you for myself --
(Chorus)
No more head trips
Pantera - This Love
Может быть, я излишне сентиментален, но это одна из моих любимых вещей как в плане лирики, так и в плане звука (из mid-core, я имею в виду).
Hey
Im feelin tired
My dream has gone today
You flirt with suicide
Sometimes thats OK
The way other say
Im here standing hollow
Falling away from me
Fallin.. away from me
NAA. one thing: if U use such a different "far-from-the-language" english like me :) - the word that reads naturally "thanks" will look this way: "thnx".
Я знаю, что я зануда)))
Но даже изврат бывает классическим))
Yes.. It really rulz in completion with your previous worx, but IMHO your style is not an ideal one. Some words and phrazes... Are too incomplex. One who reads this comes with feeling that part of your creo was written by REAL poet, and than came some real dammit and wrote the second part, just in case.
Щека давно не помнит рук,
Она не брита. - damn it! Get away tha shit and your poem will come twice as better!
Идея 100% рулез. В графе "кнопка" две батоны: "убить" и "помиловать". Или радио-батон (одиночный выбор в смысле). Голос юзера из trusted считается за 5 простых, голос супер-юзера за 25 - и все пучком))))
BTW читая текущее произведение: банд "в отстойщиков" быть не должно? Я буду первым бандообразователем! Набор в банду начат...
